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Hello, It’s Me

I was wondering if after all these years you’d like to finally meet. But without all the angst.

Hello! It is I, Cindy Nguyen-Pham, one of the two new spring 2018 interns for CambridgeEditors. I hail from the sunny shores of Southern California, and I have been cold since getting off the plane. I came to Boston to pursue my MA in Publishing and Writing at Emerson College. Post grad plans are subject to change, but ultimately, I hope to be an acquisition editor for young reader and young adult books and be owned by three cats (Mochi, Sesame Seed, and Fungus).


Hello from the outside. I’m in California dreaming of who I used to be.

I have a BA in English Creative Writing from Mills College (go Cyclones!) in Oakland, California, where I realized that my love for stories tend towards those targeted at a younger age range. Children’s, young reader, and young adult books are my jam. My favorite authors include Eoin Colfer, Allie Brosh, Lemony Snicket, and Shel Silverstein. I also enjoy oral stories. It is amazing how much you can learn just by talking to random people and hearing about their unique experiences.

It is difficult because the world of publishing and literature demands the sacrifice of your body, soul, and mortal time, but I do make attempts to have a life outside of it. Yes to all food adventures; eating is my favorite activity of all time. Sushi is life. I also enjoy travel, whether this means jetting off to some international location or discovering a fun place to explore locally.  When I’m not finding ways to put memes into my academic work or sitting at home alone thinking about the playhouse I will build for my future cats and overlords, I sometimes see those people I call friends. I wave at them as I go by.

I hope you enjoyed reading about me and got a little laugh out of that. If you did not, please give me a pity laugh. Thank you. I look forward to my stint here with the CambridgeEditors team and hope to bring you a lot of interesting content in the coming months!


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Workshopping for Writers

If you’re an aspiring writer, one of the best ways to improve your work is to attend a workshop. Getting an MFA isn’t necessary for you to get involved in productive, inspiring, and thought provoking classes. Grubstreet, a creative writing program in Boston, offers over six hundred classes and programs a year with experienced instructors. These classes will read your stories, give you feedback, and allow you the opportunity to give constructive criticism to your peers. The hope is that by attending a class, you will develop a sense of accountability with your writing that will push you to both finish and revise your stories.

Classes offered

Grubstreet offers a number of courses, including workshops in short fiction, the novel, and screenwriting. For their workshops, you have a choice of a three-hour seminar, a one time six hour specialized course, or multi-week classes (six, ten, and twelve week courses offered). If you want to learn about a specific element of your craft, the three-hour seminar is probably the direction you should take. However, if you want to improve a specific story that you’re working on, you should definitely look into the multi-week classes. These classes allow you to spend an extended amount of time with an instructor and peers who are dedicated to improving their writing.

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 Why Workshop

A workshop is daunting. Turning in first drafts to strangers, or even to friends, is always nerve-wracking. While it’s never fun to receive criticism, I believe it is critical to the development of writers. There’s something about hearing feedback out loud that helps put your story into perspective. As a writer, it’s easy to get lost in intent—what you think your story is doing, the point you think you’re making. When you hear that your point isn’t coming across, or that something you thought wasn’t working actually is, you come to understand your story in a deeper way. Because of this, your revision process is more productive. Ideally, as you go to make changes, you will keep your peers’ comments in mind. This will help you avoid similar mistakes in the next story you write.

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Workshop enables writers to hear immediate reactions to their work. This allows the revision process to become more focused, as the writer has been given a specific set of concepts to keep in mind as they revise their work. Additionally, a place like Grubstreet gives aspiring writers a community centered around literacy, writing, and creativity. These connections are a great way to stay inspired and motivated, which helps keep writing at the center of one’s life.

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‘Sensitivity Readers’: Proof Your Perception

The Editorial Freelancers Association holds beneficial talks given by experienced members of their organization throughout the country. Last week, veteran editor Sea Chapman gave a presentation entitled “Editing Fiction.”


Sea Chapman, “Editing Fiction” presenter

Chapman’s talk provided a comprehensive view of developmental editing and the importance of the story at the heart of a text. For academic papers and reports, the ideas are often fully formed and need only copyediting or a review of internal logic at the sentence level. But fiction is a bit of a different beast.

Fiction works best when it is able to immerse a reader in the world it has created. Plot holes and inconsistencies break the illusion, ruining the experience for the reader. Enter the developmental editor, also known as advocate for the reader.

But even as the developmental editor works through a story’s inconsistencies, some problems may persist outside of the developmental editor’s realm of expertise. Chapman voiced concerns regarding a particular science fiction project she felt used racially coded language and characterized an alien species in racially coded and problematic ways. However, she felt she did not have the authority to advise properly on the situation and therefore referred the author to a ‘sensitivity reader.’

What is a sensitivity reader? “Part fact-checkers, part cultural ambassadors,” Katy Waldman describes in a piece for Slate. This answer is not only accurate but informative—writers may want to write certain characters but may not execute those representations adequately. At best, these shortcomings appear as heavy-handed clichés; at worst, they are harmful characterizations that reinforce negative stereotypes.

Sensitivity readers become an important test-audience that can point out where certain representations don’t ring true. If a writer is employing these stereotypes or misrepresentations because of the limits of the narrator’s character, that’s one thing—and the author will be able to defend their choice and put this decision into words—but other misrepresentations are sheer oversight.

Chapman acknowledges some writers wish to correct these errors and simply didn’t know they had made them, while others remain stubbornly insistent on keeping uncalled for misrepresentations. She says an editor must know when to pass on a project because of irreconcilable differences between editor and author.

Sensitivity readers have become a great tool for both writers and editors—effectively mediating the conversations about difficult subjects and helping the writer to avoid alienating a potential audience.

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Kill Your Darlings: The Editor’s Role in Character Representation

Founded in 1807, the Boston Athenæum has long been a staple in the local literary community prevalent in the Boston area.  Its most recent panel was entitled “Letter from the Editor: Literary Tales, Trials, and Tribulations.”

The editors featured in this talk all work for publishing houses that “incorporate notions of social justice, the exchange of ideas, and respect for diversity into their mission statements.”

The Panel:

Meghna Chakrabarti, host of Radio Boston and Modern Love: The Podcast, presided over the evening’s events. While Chakrabarti asked general publishing questions, a probing question came from the audience, “Who has the right to tell certain stories?”

In my opinion, the question was no doubt sparked by the controversy surrounding Gabriel Tallent’s debut novel My Absolute Darling, about a father sexually abusing his daughter. Published at the end of August, the novel’s release immediately incited criticism because the author is a white male. Electric Literature has explored the associated ire in-depth. Which returns us to the pertinent question: Who has the right to tell certain stories?

My Absolute Darling

The three editors brought up a valid point: Censorship is a slippery slope. Any writer should be able to write about any topic they desire. Atwan invoked the example of a young black woman writing the character of a middle-aged white man. His characterization would be valid based on the author’s experience of middle-aged white men, but a middle-aged, white male reader may feel the representation was inaccurate. It is the reader’s choice to continue reading or to put down the book.

Tallent’s novel was never specifically broached and, perhaps, the three editors had not been exposed to it or the arguments surrounding its content. But for me and the asker of the question (I assume), the specter of sexual abuse and removal of a victim’s voice from their story hung in the air.

The tacit follow-up questions for the editors were, “What is the editor’s role when navigating an author’s relationship to a subject? Should the editor question a writer’s handling of a subject based on the author’s identity or trust them to their creative interpretation?”

Without a definitive answer from the panel regarding My Absolute Darling, the question became one of censorship, a practice universally frowned upon. So, the question is left up to each individual editor as they encounter a new project: Who has the right to tell this story and do I have the right to tell someone else their account may not be valid?

–Brooke, intern

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Why Didn’t We Get a ‘Fun Home’ Sooner?

Alison Bechdel’s Fun Home is a Broadway musical. That’s right—the 2006 graphic novel now is a musical. And if you stop to think about it, the leap from panel to stage makes perfect sense: one visual medium often begets another, i.e., translations of plays to film.


The intensely personal “tragicomic” is part memoir and part mystery: an element that the musical adaptation does not forsake, although it treats the death of Alison Bechdel’s father with more certainty than the questioning comic’s treatment. Perhaps Lisa Kron and Jeanine Tesori, the adaptors of the text and cartoons to music and movement, felt a more definitive perspective regarding the Bechdel patriarch’s demise was necessary.

As an avid fan of the graphic novel and the intertextuality it displayed, I was disappointed that a large portion of the literary references were stripped from the stage version. However, I understand that every adaptation works to bring an old story to a new audience. The Fun Home musical is no different from many adaptations in that manner: it worked the poignancy of the Bechdel family’s story into music, set design, and an intricate light setup. A musical’s audience is more likely to appreciate the repeated refrain of “Maybe not right now” versus an in-depth analysis of Wallace Steven’s “Sunday Morning.”

Even still, the staging of the family reflects why it worked so well as a graphic novel: like the panels themselves, Alison, her father, and her mother are in close proximity but still unable to reach each other. This is accomplished in the musical with shafts of light separating the different family members as they progress through key moments of their respective lives—in tandem but out-of-touch with one another, much like the experience of the entire LBGQT community and the ‘mainstream’ United States.


And the gravity and implications of this production’s existence in the United State’s current climate cannot be ignored. Slate’s June Thomas pronounced Fun Home as “the first mainstream musical about a young lesbian.” Considering that same-sex marriage was just legalized in 2015, the progress of the LBGTQ community in recent years has been astronomical, but we can’t help but think: why hasn’t this all happened sooner? What new thresholds will the LBGQT community pass and surpass?

And surpass it has. Fun Home’s original 2015 Broadway production has won Tony awards for:

  • Best Musical
  • Best Book of a Musical
  • Best Original Score
  • Best Leading Actor in a Musical
  • Best Direction of a Musical

It was also nominated for:

  • Best Leading Actress in a Musical
  • Best Featured Actress in a Musical
  • Best Orchestrations
  • Best Scenic Design of a Musical
  • Best Lighting Design of a Musical

The Broadway in Boston production closes October 29, making this week your last chance to catch it while it’s in the area. And you should—not only is it an excellent show, it’s a piece of history.

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LBGTQ+ History Month Spotlight: Take My Wife

October is LGBTQ+ history month, and I want to celebrate it by talking about the T.V. show, Take My Wife. Take My Wife was a television show on Seeso that focused on the marriage of two comedians, Rhea and Cameron (played by real life wives Rhea Butcher and Cameron Esposito). The show had an all female writer’s room, 43% of whom were women of color, employed LGBTQ+ actors in more than 47 roles in their second season, and actively sought out queer people in the industry to be a part of their production team. The show is considered one of the most inclusive T.V. shows available today. On August 9, 2017, Seeso announced it would be shutting down, throwing the fate of Take My Wife into limbo.  


Photo courtesy of Seeso

I’m a huge fan of T.V. This started at a young age when I became captivated by the various adventures of those little guys on The Rugrats and continued when I heard my parents laughing in the living room while they watched Friends and Will and Grace. Anytime I scampered in to join in on the fun, they shooed me away, saying I was too young to watch and the beautiful people on the screen were just being silly. I started calling Friends The Silly People Show for this reason, and ever since I was (appropriately) censored from seeing it as a five year old, I have wanted to consume as many sitcoms as possible.

As I’ve gotten older and more pretentious, I’ve been drawn to more sophisticated stories that explore deeper, more complicated themes. However, I haven’t been able to shake my love for the sitcom. There’s something comforting about the genre, but I’ve become intensely frustrated by these shows’ lack of diversity. I’ve come to expect the same patterns when I watch these shows: predominately white, straight, and written by men.

Enter: Take My Wife.

Women write the episodes, the stars of the show are openly queer, and the supporting cast and folks behind the scenes are diverse in their race, gender, and sexuality. The aura of the show, unlike the shows I had grown used to, is completely inclusive. I had finally found a sitcom I could get excited about.

For the sake of time, I’m going to focus specifically on the pilot, which you can watch here. The show had me immediately after the opening. Close shots of everything in twos: toothbrushes, mugs, crusty cereal bowls. We are welcomed into the intimacy and warmth of our two main characters’ world. We don’t know how they came together, we don’t know how they came out, but we know that in this moment, they are together, and they are happy.

Except they aren’t quite happy, it turns out. Each are unsatisfied with various elements of their careers. They’re trying to find their rhythm, their balance. They face misogyny and failure and frustrations in the work place. Rhea practices her standup and gets continually interrupted by her needy boss, and Cameron eats soup alone in her car. They celebrate one another. They argue. They spoon.


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And that’s what makes Take My Wife so innovative: its normalcy. Rhea and Cameron play a couple pursuing creative careers. They miscommunicate, make mistakes, support one another, and manage to slip in some wacky escapades along the way. No one dies (sorry, that’s a spoiler I guess), the main characters aren’t made to feel morally compromised for their sexuality, and the show’s lack of toxic masculinity feels like a breath of fresh air. Sure, there are ways the show could improve, but it only had six episodes to find its voice. The fact that it succeeded in that venture in such a short amount of time is an indication that Cameron and Rhea and their team are on to something really great and innovative.

I think this show is important to highlight during LGBTQ+ history month because it does what few shows before it have done: it celebrates queer people, it celebrates diversity, and it doesn’t cast queer characters in the margins of the show as quirky sidekicks or characters fated for tragic endings. This is enormously important. I can’t help but think that if more stories like Take My Wife were on mainstream networks, there would be less fear and hatred surrounding queer people—less discrimination, more empathy. At the end of the day, what Take My Wife shows is that Rhea and Cameron are just two gals trying to navigate their careers and personal lives while remaining deeply in love and attracted to one another.

My love for T.V. remains as strong as it did back in the days when the sitcom remained a mystery to me. I think I love television so much because I believe it has the capacity to bring about real social change due to its ability to showcase the stories of so many different people. However, these diverse stories only get told when someone takes a chance on them. So take a chance on Take My Wife; get lost in the warmth and complexity of the world Rhea and Cameron have created, which reflects the lives that they live. America needs to see lives like these because, to me, they look a lot like hope.

Madeline Sneed, Intern


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Don’t Overlook the Newly Published Novel, Drag

As our intern Brooke Knisley has suggested in her blog post “The Intellectualization of the Genre Novel,” we’re apt to skip novels excluded from the list of Editor’s Picks: those novels considered ‘under the radar’. When Brooke refers to genre novels, she includes thrillers we can’t put down; romances that play on our sentiments; and murder mysteries published by all but a select set of recognized serializes. The Genre Novel tag has often extended, when they first appear, to works pockmarked by expletives; while in retrospect so many of these rise to occupy the status of classics, such as Kerouac and Burroughs.

Nonetheless, whether mood or presentation/sensibility relegate Genre Novels to airport turnstiles–on the one hand–and beer-soaked basements–on the other–they are, as Brooke contends, far more than “guilty pleasures.” For they are “indicative of larger events surrounding (their) creation.” Perhaps best poised to present to our current condition is the after-work writer, seated at the kitchen table, under the glare of the florescent lights. If we read only hardbacks displayed in bookstore windows, though, we are we are apt to miss out on new voices, keyed in when the house is silent. It is in this spirit that I choose to write about a recently published novel, Drag, by Domenic D. Augustus & S. M. Dudley, and edited by CambridgeEditors.


When Drag’s main character, Vincent, initiates his divorce, he checks off every decency point: “(He) would pay bi-weekly child support, and cover Kaye’s and Emmy’s health insurance, and Emmy’s future college tuition.” (p. 47) Displayed here are Vincent’s eerie, picture-perfect planning skills. Scanning into the future and back through the past, he fends off blame before his ex-wife, Kaye, has time to vocalize it. Besides, insofar as his daughter is concerned, Vincent wants to continue seeing Emmy, a foot-in-the-door but authentically held gesture. Nonetheless, father-daughter outings, once Vincent has severed all conventional ties, feature the consequences of Vincent’s break with the American Dream. When moments of routine togetherness turn aggravating, Vincent’s bitterness rears up, and is expressed in gratuitous side-remarks playing within his closed-off psyche. Common-place pleasures increasingly evoke sarcasm. His obsessions are on autopilot. What thoughts come to mind when his daughter drops her ice cream cone? “They should put a human kiddie car wash in these family bathrooms. Slide the kids on a conveyor belt to clean face, hands, and fannies all at once.” (p. 99) Relationships with family members have become strained.  He no longer perceives their three-dimensionality. The experience of washing up his daughter concludes inwardly with the comment, “So gross.” Involuntary thoughts document the Twitter feed of his decline.  With tunnel vision he maps out his master caper.

In the divorce’s immediate aftermath, Vincent allows his appearance to go messy. Once his plan for the future coalesces, though, Vincent rebounds as if to the call of duty. Re-employed and respectable, he dons the look and trappings of his former self. This holds true even after the snag that bungles the first run of his caper—when he is called in for questioning: “[Vincent’s] intent is to remain calm and cool and emit the emotion of a man not entering into a police station to be questioned in a crime, but rather that of a man entering into a post office to retrieve his mail.” (p. 86)

A twinge of ‘wrong’ does tap on Vincent’s shoulder sometimes, personified by his mother in heaven, and by his interrogating officers, their suspicions not entirely quelled. Nonetheless, he enjoys a spell of successfully duping those with whom he comes into contact: on a daily basis as the company man; and when a try at his plan short circuits, receiving the sympathy owed the hapless, injured patient. So why does the ruthless risk that drives him not dissipate? Having found his way out of the status quo, why does he push his luck? The thrill that Vincent derives from each new dare is, the novel suggests, psychologically diagnosable. Nonetheless, what are readers to infer from the way the novel progresses with increasing speed away from Middle Class family conventions, occupations, and expectations of sustained intimacy? Here, I suggest, Drag breaks new ground.

On the theme of perfectly good marriages ending in divorce, when Drag’s central character leaves his life–unlike in Cheever’s and Updike’s novels–his goal is not to maximize seductions–others’ wives–nor is it the pursuit of a generalized lust. The trope of consummating, bonding with another, for however briefly and even when that “other” is objectified, cannot be the motivating feature here. It is precluded by the focus self-preoccupation. None of Vincent’s reasons fit familiar, prior molds. Although Vincent is wistfully envious of those born into the haves, greed is not a motivation. In the course of the novel, drink and bad company are too transitory to count. And although apathy precludes guilt, Vincent wishes no one harm. This would explain why we are inclined neither to damn, nor pity, the character or his plight.

Vincent may be a character to whom the paradigmatic American notion of responsibility does not apply. Does it give way to a determinism of sorts? And if we yield to this notion, does it apply, by extension, to the incomprehensible landscape of our new, American times?

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– Dr. Harte Weiner

CambridgeEditors founder and lead editor

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