and yet you think it is good, you may very well be right. Often times the first draft has the essence at its core. Let us see if we can help you with getting more out of that essence; maybe you don’t need help. Become your own impulsive editor. Be sure not to forget to take impulse to the waiting room, or planning room, or central arena, where you can fill out the gut feeling, gut insight or instinct, insight, or intuition. If you start with what you know to be true, you won’t have much trouble saying why you know it, given the uninterrupted time to do so….